评价:
这一段和上一段一样举例。但是在结尾的时候对两段的例子做了一个共同性的总结。
Of course,in the modern China we also have some unqualified leaders who take their leading positions not because they want to fulfill some tasks of great concern but because they know “somebody” and bribe the higher and mighty. However,since they cannot meet people’s demands, it is very easy for their illegal doings to be exposed in the mass media such as TV news, newspaper reports, or blogs. Once exposed, their leading positions cannot last long. From this perspective, we can also predict with confidence that leaders should be generated from the demands put on their shoulders.
评价:
这一段是一个让步段,要考虑到自己的主要论点的相反方,做到“换位思考”,从而让自己的言论更加的客观、全面。
In conclusion,to be a leader means to direct people going out of their difficulties or confusions, to help them realize their situations and themselves, and to achieve some common goals which will be beneficial to the people and even to the whole world.
评价:
最后一段结尾升华,总结一下全文的观点和内容。