Personal Statement个人陈述
我的名字是XXX，我已经在XXXX学校里已研究了两年了，之前，我花了我的学校生活在国际高中在XXX，一个美丽的城市，位于中国西南部的部分。现在我正在申请XXX大学，我想选工商管理管理作为我的专业。我相信，在这所大学的进一步研究会给我很大的机会，有进一步研究的业务和为我提供一个多元化的氛围中发展我个性，所以我决定选择这所大学的花费的大学生活，把握企业的足够知识的地方。
我是一个外向的女孩与各种爱好。我喜欢游泳，看书。我认为游泳可以让我坚强的身体和阅读可以让我丰富的记在心里。我也喜欢交朋友，因为我觉得我可以从中学到很多不同的人当我在我高中的昆明，我担任我的类的帮助，并愿意帮助他人在任何时候，志愿者组在我校的参与增加了我的责任感，也让我成为一个更大的人。
My name is XXXX, and I have been studied in XXXXX SCHOOL in New Rochelle for two years, and before, I spent my school life at International High School at XXX, a beautiful city lies in southwest part of China. Now I am applying for XXXX University and I would like to choose Business Administration Management as my major. I am convinced that the further study in this university will give me great opportunity to have further study in business and provide me with a diversified atmosphere to develop my personality, so I decide to choose this university as the place to spend college life and grasp sufficient knowledge of business.
I am an outgoing girl with various hobbies. I like swimming and reading. I think swimming can make me strong in body and reading can make me rich in mind. I also like to make friends for I think I can learn a lot from different people. When I was in my high school Kunming, I served as a helper in my class and was willing to help others at any time. The participation of the volunteer group in my school increased my sense of responsibility and also made me a greater person.
I have spent two years in THORNTON-DONOVAN SCHOOL and this time, I am applying for Long island University for my college study. I know that this university is famous for its business major and I choose Business Management as my major out of interest. When I was in International High School at Kunming, I had already begun to cultivate my business sense. During the summer vacation in 2014, I participated as an employee in Kunming Junshuo Co., Ltd. for a month. During this internship, I gained certain knowledge on business, such as how to promote a company’s products to customers, and how to negotiate the prices with business partners, etc. This experience makes me grow up a lot. I not only gain knowledge about business in practice, but become more confirmed that business is what I want to choose as my future career.
I want to be a business person in the future, and the person who give me this thought and who encourage me the most are my parents. They build up their business from nothing and through difficulties, they finally create their own company. My parents are dedicated to their business career, and they always tell me to be brave when facing the obstacles. In my mind, they are my life coach for they not only teach me how to be a great person, but how to choose your future career. I want to have further study in Long Island University and then return home to inherit my parents.
I know for now that I don’t have enough knowledge for business, but I have passion on business and determination to learn it well. The Long Island University has good reputation and is world-wide known for its teaching advantages. The subject of business makes it more attractive for me. It is the perfect university to widen my horizon and achieve my career goal, so I would like to choose it and I believe that through the efforts, I will have an excellent behavior and I will not let you down.
Above all, I have strong desire to go to Long Island University even I know that there are still various aspects that I need to improve on. If I were enrolled in your university, I will spend more time on business subject to improve myself and make preparation for my future business path.
