5. 不要写行业或工作报告，只要写你的目标。
文章要求的是你和你的目标，录取委员会想了解你的经历和你的思想，所以千万不要走题。常见的错误是申请者把一段关于他们未来从事行业的报告插进来，迟迟不能进入正题。如果你的目标是进军电子商务业，你不用写200字介绍什么是电子商务，为什么它会持续发展。很简单，如果你的目标是在亚洲工作，录取委员会不需要了解为何亚洲经济在90年代衰败以及它为何会再度兴起。
6. 把资料集中在一起。
对许多学校而言，你的目标应该是大约200字的东西。就想下面所列出的模式一样：
BASED ON MY EXPERIENCS AS A _________, _________, AND A _________, MY LONG TERM GOAL IS _________. THIS COULD TAKE SEVERAL FORMS.
1. _________
2. _________
3. _________
TWO COMPANIES WHICH I GREATLY ADMIRE ARE _________ WHICH IS THE LEADING SUPPLIER OF _________ TO _________ AND _________ WHICH IS A BREAK AWAY FROM A BIG COMPANY.
I ALSO GREATLY ADMIRE JOHN DOE WHO FOUNDED _________ IN HIS _________ WITH ONLY $ _________ AND MARY SMITH WHO STARTED _________ AFTER HAVING NINE CHILDREN AND DEVELOPED IT INTO THE LEADING SUPPLIER OF FERTILIZERS AND PETROCHEMICAL-BASED CLOTHING IN EUROPE.
ALTHOUGH THERE IS NO CLEAR WAY TO THIS GOAL, AFTER B-SCHOOL I WOULD WANT TO DO _________ WHERE I WILL LEARN:
1. _________
2. _________
3. _________
IN FIVE YEARS MY PLAN IS AS FOLLOWS: _________.
