a sophisticated understanding of both the complex reality in China and the general market principles and theories that apply throughout the world, like it or not. ***University, with its high repute of educational quality, is the university I have long admired. I am confident that, through the study I can give full plays to my potential and realize my career goal.
I have felt myself a lucky person, who has grown up in a loving family, its well educated, and with a good job. Now I feel even luckier since I have married the woman I truly love, and I have got this great opportunity to study aboard. My wife and I have known each other more than 12 years, although we stayed in separated cities in recent years, our love for each other has never changed. Our two families have got along very well and her mother has treated me like her own son, also my parents consider my wife to be their own daughter. The two families all have high expectation on me and I really think that I should study hard and accomplish more in future so as to take better care of my family members whom I love so much. I believe after I come back to China I will not disappoint them and I will try my best to be a successful economist, a caring husband and some day a respectable father.
教育留学专家评论:
这是一篇相对比较成功的学习计划,首先中心思想比较明确,申请者花了绝大部分笔墨在解释他在申请中的最大问题-转专业的问题,并没有像大部分中国学生那样重复他的简历,同时举了具体的一些例子,如投资股票市场最后失败,尤其突出的是最后一段提到为什么他要返回中国的原因比较有人情味和说服力.
缺点是应该文章开头写清楚要申请的专业和自己的简单情况,这样录取官员马上就可以了解到他需要在本篇文章中看什么,这样能使重点突出.另外,文章在逻辑上有点散乱,有些话题挖掘得不深,例如投资于股票市场失败,有没有采取什么方式补救? 除了体会中国股票市场不成熟,如果从经济学的角度来分析,是否有其他深层次的原因?
