不用担心给出专有名词老师不知道,就怕不给专有名词,反而会让论证显得空洞,比如上面例文切片中的“土耳其浴”,虽然我们不知道具体是干嘛的,但是我们还是可以理解意思。
又比如,我之前给出的示范:
原文:
Finally, it is widely believed that some artistic outputs have contributed to the tourism of a country. There are holidaymakers who visit a country so they can witness a painting, sculptures or any artistic masterpiece. To illustrate, the painting of Juan Luna “ the Spolarium” in the Philippines has lured a considerable number of foreign visitors. This is because the painting depicts the suffering of most Filipinosat the time of Spaniard regime, which becomes a historical event in the country.
其中 Juan Luna 、 “ the Spolarium” 、 Spaniard regime 都是专有名词,我完全不知道啥意思,但是,不影响我认同作者的观点。
对比于没有这么具体的细节,加上之后,反而更加有说服力,不信,你可以自己感受一下:
删除专有词之后:
.... To illustrate, the painting of some local events has lured a considerable number of foreign visitors. This is because the painting depicts the suffering of people in the history of the Philippines.
5.作对比
正面的论述写到没话说了,我们就写反面。
一种是写同类事物的缺点,反衬我们所支持的方法的优点。
比如,在是否一定要上大学的题目中,我们支持早点出去工作,可以累积更多的实用技能。如果要强化论证,我们可以反向强调一下,大学的知识更多是理论化的,和实际脱节,学生拿到一个好文凭,却不能把工作做好。
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